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Pokemon: Wedgies for Ash Part 1 - (Read 24,510 Times)
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 2nd, 2009 at 05:11 pm

Constructive Criticism and advice is approved
(Also This Takes place before Ash gets his fifth badge)
(PS, Misty will be giving Ash wedgies in the next post)


"ASH KETCHUM!!!!!!!!" Came the sound of a certain red haired tomboy
(who was currently wet) as she was chasing a certain boy with a baseball cap who was laughing his butt off at Misty's rather "drenched" appearance.
"I thought you liked getting 'wet' Misty " came Ash's
reply. Misty then growls out "ONLY WHEN I'AM NOT IN MY REGULAR CLOTHES!!!"

The two preteen pokemon trainers then continue their little chase, until Misty finally catches Ash by the back of his jacket. Ash comes to a complete stop thanks to the fact that Misty was stronger then him. "Brock is out looking for pokemon supplies in town with Pikachu. And since it'll take a while for them to return, I have all the time I need" Said Misty as she smiled an evil smile
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 2nd, 2009 at 05:11 pm

Continued from the last sentence)

"For what?" Ash asked confusingly.

Misty then replied "THIS!!!"

Misty then grabbed the blue waistband of Ash's boxer shorts and pulled them up to Ash's neck, Ash's boxers were white with Charmander(http://dialga.blogia.com/upload/20071002211624-charmander.gif prints on them) prints on them. Misty then pulls them again, this time lifting Ash off the ground.

Ash: "OWW!!!!!!"

Misty: *Smirks* Haven't received a wedgie have you Mr. Pokemon master ?

Ash dosen't reply as he is in pain. Misty then carries Ash over to a nearby tree with a low enough branch. Misty then lifts Ash higher up to the branch and puts the leg holes of Ash's underwear through the tree branch. Misty is laughing while holding her sides while Ash is hanging seven feet off the ground by his undies (which is pretty high for Ash to hang from since he's only ten years old). Misty then pulls on Ash's legs thus making the wedgie more intense, Ash's underwear even begins to rip a little. Misty pulls harder and harder, until Ash's boxers can't take it anymore and rip. Ash then falls to the floor and lands on his stomach.

Ash: "Ooooowww"

Misty: "Don't think I'am done yet.... I still have ideas for you..."

Misty then ties Ash to a tree and gags him with his own torn boxers. Misty tapes the underwear so Ash can't call for help.

Misty: "Now wait here, I'll be back with some 'supplies' "


(I'll stop here for a while, after that, I'll continue from here)

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Post Icon Posted: Apr 3rd, 2009 at 09:13 am

Thirty minutes later, Misty comes back with what appeared to be a small shopping bag, a couple of long ropes, and Ash's pokeballs!!

Ash: MMM!!! MMMM!!! MMM!!!

Misty: *removes the gag, as well as the torn boxers*

Ash: Please don't do this!!! I'am sorry!!!!

Misty: Sorry doesn't count it Ashy boy! This is what you get when you mess with me..

Ash: Come on Misty!!! I promise this won't happen again!!

Misty: Ash, you need to learn to never cross me. I'am gonna make sure it stays that way.

Ash is then silent... He couldn't see any flaw in Misty's logic, so he decides to go along with it.

Misty then unties Ash, but she keeps a strong grip on Ash's jacket so he dosen't escape.

Misty: *hands the shopping bag to Ash* Now, you're gonna change out of those torn pair of undies.. You can change in private, but if you try to escape I WILL catch you and I WILL make it worse for you, got it?

Ash: Y-yes


Ash then goes behind a tree and change.

A few minutes later, Ash comes from behind the tree.

Misty: Good, now let's begin....

With that, Misty reaches down Ash's jeans with her left hand, grabs the underwear, and pulls so hard that she lifts Ash off the ground with one hand.

Ash: *grunts in pain*

Misty: Oh and just so ya know, the material is extremely durable and stretchy, so it won't rip..

Ash: So How long will this go on?

Misty: *Grins* As long as I want to...

(I'll stop here for now)

« Last Edited by dragonfire Apr 14th, 2009 at 05:48 pm »
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Hello, the is Kevin. Sorry im not at my phone, ill call back soon!

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Post Icon Posted: Apr 4th, 2009 at 03:00 pm

Very good, it was really good. A few suggestions are that you need to make them longer, and put some more emotion in it. Like instead of ash giving up that easily, you should of had him beg.
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 5th, 2009 at 07:31 pm

Okay, thanks Smiley
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 15th, 2009 at 10:47 pm

what kind of underwear is he wearing the second time he gets a wedgie?!?!?!? is it boxers, boxerbriefs, briefs, cartoon briefs, tighty whities.... knowing would add to the story.... but other wise quite good Smiley
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Friends are like wedgies: It feels great to get a good one.... lol its perfect
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 15th, 2009 at 11:23 pm

He's wearing Tightie Whities Smiley
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 16th, 2009 at 12:09 am

I really like this story and would love to see more additions and especially some utterly undies parts of it and misty humiliating ash i.e. naked/panties/diaper/tied up
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 16th, 2009 at 01:18 am

Misty's trying to teach Ash a lesson, her goal certainly isn't to humiliate him
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 17th, 2009 at 01:15 pm

Other people don't need to see it for him to be embarrassed.
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 17th, 2009 at 04:59 pm

Still, it's punishment.
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 18th, 2009 at 09:25 am

Apr 15th, 2009 at 11:23 pm, dragonfire wrote:
He's wearing Tightie Whities Smiley


YES!!!!!!!!!! thanks what I thought.... hahahaha that makes it soooo much funnier.... hahahahaha I wonder what it would be like to get a wedgie in the world of pokemon Smiley
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 18th, 2009 at 09:47 am

Well, it might actually be funny (I got the idea of this story because I used to watch Pokemon all the time when I was a little kid Smiley )
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 18th, 2009 at 11:54 am

You should continue it, I like it.
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Post Icon Posted: Apr 19th, 2009 at 02:02 pm

Really? Thanks!!

And yes, I will continue... I just need an exact idea which pokemon Misty will use since she has Ash's pokeballs
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