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Post Icon Posted: Dec 1st, 2009 at 08:20 pm

this is good i like the twin thing to me it just makes it seem better, i have no clue why though
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 1st, 2009 at 10:36 pm

It certainly is an interesting plot point with his illness and the fact that he can't run. Plus everyone knows twins are just more awesome then regular siblings. It seemed like more of a set up chapter, but the information about Liam interested me.
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 2nd, 2009 at 02:34 pm

yes thtas what i was trying to say i just was having trouble saying it
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 2nd, 2009 at 04:31 pm

Psh. Stealing credit for my words.
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 2nd, 2009 at 05:52 pm

hey you did it with alex
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 2nd, 2009 at 09:59 pm

Oh... someone remembers that.
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 3rd, 2009 at 05:16 am

hahahaha
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 3rd, 2009 at 03:20 pm

Great story so keep goin
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 5th, 2009 at 03:35 pm

Very good, so far. It looks like a good set up for some nice twists.
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 7th, 2009 at 05:05 pm

The rest of the day passed on slowly, but Nolan and his friends did return. As they entered the courtyard they pulled on our legs making the three of us moan and scream through the gags even more than we already were. Eventually our underwear ripped and more was put on us before we were carried away.

We were thrown into the bed of Nolan's truck and were being brought god knows where. At least, for a time, we weren't getting wedgies; it was...relieving; relieving until we remembered there was a lot worse to come. That made all three of us sweat and struggle in our bonds, just praying for a miracle.

The truck stopped and we were picked up out of the truck by our tighty whities and were carried into the building the same way. We were brought downstairs and that's where the real torment began.

First they once again tied ropes through our underwear, but this time through the front. We were quickly hoisted into the air with the underwear crushing our privates as the gags successfully silenced our cries and begs.

"Who's ever underwear rips first will get the first punishment," said Nolan as he and his friends began pulling on our legs. And with my luck my underwear was the first to rip. The only consolation was that I at least was going to get the over with.

Three more pairs of underwear were put on me as I was brought into a different room and retied spread eagle, face down, on top of a bed. My gag was still in place as well as my blindfold.

One of them sat on my back and the wedgie torture began. The underwear once again began rising up slowly, taunting me, and then suddenly they jerked it up all the way to my neck and keep jerking it up and up until it ripped. I kept trying to scream through my gag even though i knew it was futile.

Once again the second pair of underwear was jerked up and i cried through my gag as the pulled and pulled successfully bringing it over my head without ripping it. Right after the third pair of underwear was jerked up and was being pulled constantly as it ripped before getting to my head.

"Now here's what we are going to do, Noah," said Nolan, "We decided that you have to have three atomic wedgies without them ripping and we are going to do this until that happens. Then we will go torture one of the other three,"

I once again moaned through my gag as my legs were untied and more underwear was put on me. Wedgie after wedgie after wedgie but not one more became atomic as they all ripped. They didn't give up, however, and more underwear was placed on me only to be jerked up and rip.

I don't really know how long it took but eventually they got three to go atomic without ripping. Something gave me the feeling that they ripped some of them on purpose.

They untied me, gave me another pair of underwear, and led me out to the large basement area. Liam and Ryan were untied and wearing new underwear themselves.

"Ryan it's your turn now; Noah sit with your brother. If you so much as move it will be much worse for him than it was for you," said Nolan

Ryan reluctantly got up and followed, shaking with fear, face pale with terror, but he went in his head held high.

"Was it really that bad?" asked Liam, "We could hear you scream,"

"I...I don't want to talk about it," I said as we began hearing muted screams from Ryan as his wedgie torture had started.

Once again I wasn't sure how long had passed before they brought Ryan out, but it didn't matter. Now Liam and I had a plan; all we needed now was the opportunity.

"Now for the final kid unless you Noah want to be noble and take his place?" asked Nolan

"...alright, I'll do it," I said as Nolan walked in front of me giving me the perfect opportunity. I kicked him in the groin and charged the senior to my right into the wall taking the breath right out of him.

"Ryan get Liam to a phone, he'll know what to do, just make sure he gets there,"

"But what about you?" asked Ryan

"Don't worry just go," I said charging into another senior who tried chasing Liam who was trying his best to hurry upstairs.

"You...little...brat!" screamed Nolan as he was on the floor moaning in pain.

"I ran into another senior only to be thrown to the ground, my limbs being once again tied with duct tape.

"You are going to get it now!" said the other seniors grabbing my underwear and lifting me into another hanging wedgie.

Within five minutes they already caught Liam and Ryan, but at the same time sirens were heard as FBI agents kicked down the front door. They came into the basement and saw us tied up and my father in the lead, with his gun out, forced the seniors onto the ground...
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 7th, 2009 at 05:14 pm

That was quite the unexpected twist with the FBI agent. I liked it and that was quite noble of Noah.
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Post Icon Posted: Dec 7th, 2009 at 07:00 pm

That was very noble. thats is very very awsome with the FBI thing.
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